Paper Reflection

After looking my paper over from the comments I received from my peers and Lydia, I felt a lot better and more confident about my final paper. I think that through having others edit my paper and receiving this feedback, it was a critical step in developing my final paper. I am worried that I did not use our readings from class as a reference in my paper. I only used the movie "Gender Codes" as a reference and for this I did not have concrete reasons that could have made my paper stronger along with relating it back to what we have talked about from our readings. Another thing that I am worried about is that since I am a male, that my ad is more directed towards females and if I would have picked an ad directed towards males that I could have elaborated and had more connections in my paper. Overall I am satisfied with my ad critique and hope that I met all the criteria that I was suppose to.